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Poem, please R&R.

Tue Mar 17, 2009, 4:09 PM
  • Mood: Winter Downs
On the floor she waits.
I climb on over,
Push aside the plates
From the food that we ordered.

Lying in wait,
Her back is bare.
My hand drifts
Down its length
To feel what’s there.
I count her bones,
Find the dent in her spine.
I shudder.
This warm clean skin is mine
To cover.

That night,
I painted wings on her shoulders.
Frozen hours carried on,
The night was getting colder.
I finished,
Grabbed a blanket,
Held her tight;
It felt so good,
So right
To hold her.

I had given her wings,
In hopes to lighten the load,
Make the weight of living
A weaker foe.

That had been a blatant waste of time.

You crazy fool,
How ignorant you are.
You think that you are lonely,
That those you love are far
Away from you.

You think you
Were cast away
From all the other stars.
But from here,
Down at Earth,
It’s obvious the fault’s not ours.
You see,
It’s quite clear.
The black sky sparkles from every corner.
Looking up,
I’m sure you’d see,
And realize your insanity.

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Please.

I want this to be perfect.
I am willing to re-writeentire portions.

Just review it, please.

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  • Interests: drawing, painting, reading, checking lackadaisy site.....
  • Favourite movie: Edward Scissorhands
  • Favourite band or musician: White Stripes, Silversun Pickups, & U2
  • Favourite genre of music: Jazz!!!!
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:iconreifeen:
Thanks for the :+fav: :)

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Sorry for my English...
:iconjapdrow:
Thank you very much for the fav!
:iconmadame-humpfrey:
Dude, America is already awesome.

Yet you somehow managed to make him even more awesome.

That, my friend, is why you deserved that fave.

*high-five* ~lol

(Forgive me... I don't seriously talk like that XD)

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I spend too much time on the computer.....
*sigh*..... Oh well........ >^^<
:iconjapdrow:
Thank you! :hug:

oh
and

:blush: I'm so sorry for the misunderstanding. They're actually my OCs set in WWII. I'm really sorry if I confused you!
:iconmadame-humpfrey:
Oh, no! :blush: I know those guys were OCs.... I was taling about some of the other stuff I saw in your gallery! Your whole gallery looked good!

That comic was just my favorite example of your drawings, so that's the one I faved.... >^^<

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I spend too much time on the computer.....
*sigh*..... Oh well........ >^^<
:iconjapdrow:
:blush: I never I could be so embarrassed yet so complimented at the same time :XD:

Thanks for being understanding :hug:
:iconshawniair:
Hey, thanks for the :+fav: It really means a lot to me =D Beautiful gallery btw~
:iconlovelylollipop:
omg omg look at this! it's superjail cosplay it's beautful!
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ples look at my fan fics I think you'll like them
this is fma [link]
and this is spy vs spy [link]

Love has no gender
:iconroygbivibgyor:
Thanks for the favorite~

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